more mi version.

reader-friendly version.
(well sorry, i can't decide which one to put, so there you go, haha.)
i see a starry night
the sky is so clear
the stars are dancing in heaps
and they winked at mi
it's been how long i wonder
forever is far too overrated
mi and you
in such lovely night
on a lawn so fluffy
laying so close to each other
watching the stars
making no wishes
living that dream
drown in love
so beautiful, so perfect
yet, you
the one makes the picture
are absent
in this broken puzzle
and how can i
not be lost
in this wide winged world
well, this is what i saw, the starry erm, dawn, while am cycling home.
(6.10-6.40 am.)
how i wish
a dream come true
pieces with no you,
yang
Love both of them. You drew them??
ReplyDeleteNice poem.
LOL.
ReplyDeleteWELL, I CANT DRAW.
SO, WHAT DO YOU SAY?
btw, thanks :D